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		<title>12 Step Foolproof Sales Letter Template by David Frey</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[Writing sales copy is an art that I&#8217;ve not mastered yet. They say that you can make a fortune by writing sales copy. I believe that! It is because I tried it before and I know that it is not as easy as I thought it should have been. But for people like Jo Han [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Writing sales copy is an art that I&#8217;ve not mastered yet. They say that you  can make a fortune by writing sales copy.</p>
<p>I believe that!</p>
<p>It is because I tried it before and I know that it is not as easy as I thought  it should have been.</p>
<p>But for people like Jo Han Mok and Dan Kennedy, they would agree with me that  there is lots of dollars in copywriting.</p>
<p>All in all, if you want to sell products online or if you want to convince  people to take the action you want, it doesn&#8217;t hurt to learn at least the basic  of writing a sales letter.</p>
<p>Recently, I had a chance to launch a product that its sales letter was written  100% by me. The worse part was that this letter was not written in English.  There were no swipe files or a mentor (yet) to look over my shoulder.</p>
<p>But, it converted at 8.6%.</p>
<p>I know that there are a lot more factors than the sales letter in that  conversion number but what I want to let you know is that you can do this if you  follow the step that I have done.</p>
<p>Before I began writing the sales copy, I took out a few resources for my  reference and this one is at the top of my list.</p>
<p>It is an article by David Frey and it is pretty long.</p>
<p>However, it is very informative.</p>
<p>Read the article below if you think that copywriting is something of your  interest.</p>
<p><font color="#ff0000"><strong>12 Step Foolproof Sales Letter</strong></font></p>
<p>You don&#8217;t have to be an award-winning copywriter to create effective sales  letters. In fact, writing great sales letters is more of a science than an art.  Even the pros use proven &#8220;templates&#8221; to create sales letters that get results.  The following is a 12-step template for writing foolproof sales letters.</p>
<p><strong>Overcoming the Hurdles Leading to Buying Resistance</strong></p>
<p>Every person has some form of buying resistance. The objective of your sales  letter should be to overcome your reader&#8217;s buying resistance while persuading  them to take action. I liken writing a sales letter to running a steeplechase  foot race. The first one to the finish line who has jumped over all the hurdles  is the winner, or in this case, gets the sale.</p>
<p>Whether you&#8217;re giving a sales presentation in person or on paper, the process of  overcoming the hurdles leading to buying resistance are much the same. These  hurdles are manifested in many spoken and unspoken customer comments such as:</p>
<p>&#8220;You don&#8217;t understand my problem&#8221;<br />
&#8220;How do I know you&#8217;re qualified&#8221;<br />
&#8220;I don&#8217;t believe you&#8221;<br />
&#8220;I don&#8217;t need it right now&#8221;<br />
&#8220;It won&#8217;t work for me&#8221;<br />
&#8220;What happens if I don&#8217;t like it&#8221;<br />
&#8220;I can&#8217;t afford it&#8221;</p>
<p>Results-oriented sales letters will need to address some or all of these  objections to be effective. The 12-step sales letter template is designed to  overcome each of these objections in a careful, methodical series of copywriting  tactics. The 12 steps are:</p>
<p>Get attention<br />
Identify the problem<br />
Provide the solution<br />
Present your credentials<br />
Show the benefits<br />
Give social proof<br />
Make your offer<br />
Inject scarcity<br />
Give a guarantee<br />
Call to action<br />
Give a warning<br />
Close with a reminder</p>
<p>Each of these 12 steps add to reader&#8217;s emotions while calming their fears.</p>
<p><strong>Motivation Is An Emotional Thing</strong></p>
<p>It&#8217;s important to remember that people are motivated to buy based on their  emotions and justify their purchase based on logic only after the sale. This  means that each step in the sales letter process must build on the reader&#8217;s  emotions to a point where they are motivated to take action.</p>
<p>That being true &#8211; - there are only two things that truly motivate people and  they are the promise of gain or the fear of loss. Of the two, the fear of loss  is the stronger motivator.</p>
<p>Think about it.</p>
<p>Would you rather buy a $50 course on &#8220;How to Improve Your Marriage&#8221; or &#8220;How to  Stop Your Divorce or Lover&#8217;s Rejection?&#8221; I have empirical data that proves that  the second title outsells the first 5 to 1. Why? Because it addresses the fear  of loss.</p>
<p>Underlying the promise of gain and the fear of loss are seven &#8220;universal  motivations&#8221; to which everyone responds. Whatever product or service you are  selling you need to position it so that its benefits provide one or more of  these universal motivations.</p>
<p>To be wealthy<br />
To be good looking<br />
To be healthy<br />
To be popular<br />
To have security<br />
To achieve inner peace<br />
To have free time<br />
To have fun</p>
<p>Ultimate motivations are what people &#8220;really&#8221; want. The product or service is  just a vehicle to providing these benefits so make sure your sales letter  focuses on these motivational factors.</p>
<p><strong>The 12-Step Sales Letter System</strong></p>
<p>Now that we know what impedes a person to buy and what motivates a person to  action let&#8217;s review the 12 elements of a winning sales letter.</p>
<p><strong>1. Get Attention</strong></p>
<p>Assuming the reader has opened your envelope, the next step is to get their  attention. The opening headline is the first thing that your reader will look  at. If it doesn&#8217;t catch their attention you can kiss your letter goodbye. People  have a very short attention span and usually sort their mail over the  wastebasket. If the headline doesn&#8217;t call out to them and perk their interest,  they will just stop and throw your letter away.</p>
<p>The following are three headline generating templates that are proven to get  attention.</p>
<p>&#8220;HOW TO _____________________&#8221;</p>
<p>People love to know how to do things. When combined with a powerful benefit the  &#8220;How to&#8221; headline always gets people&#8217;s attention. In fact, it&#8217;s probably the two  most powerful words you can use in a headline.</p>
<p>&#8220;SECRETS OF _________________ REVEALED!&#8221;</p>
<p>People always want to know &#8220;insider secrets.&#8221; We love to know things that other  people aren&#8217;t privy to. Knowledge is power and those who have it feel powerful.  Besides that, most of us enjoy a good mystery, especially in the end when the  &#8220;secret&#8221; is revealed.</p>
<p>WARNING: DON&#8217;T EVEN THINK OF ___________ UNTIL YOU ___________.</p>
<p>Remember that people are motivated by fear of loss more than the promise of  gain? Well, the &#8220;warning&#8221; headline screams fear. The word &#8220;warning&#8221; demands  attention and combined with something of interest to the reader, is a very  powerful headline.</p>
<p><strong>2. Identify the Problem</strong></p>
<p>Now that you have your reader&#8217;s attention you need to gain their interest by  spelling out their problem and how it feels to have that problem. The reader  should say to himself, &#8220;Yeah, that&#8217;s exactly how I feel&#8221; when they read your  copy. In fact, you shouldn&#8217;t stop there. Pretend that it&#8217;s an open wound that  you&#8217;re rubbing salt into.</p>
<p>This technique is called, &#8220;problem &#8211; agitate.&#8221; You present the problem then  agitate it so that they really feel the pain and agony of their situation.  People are such strong creatures of habit that we rarely change our ways unless  we feel great amounts of pain. In fact, companies are no different. Most  businesses trudge along doing the same old thing until things get so bad that  they have to make a change.</p>
<p>For example, if you were selling garage door openers you might agitate the  problem by telling a short story about what happens when it doesn&#8217;t work.</p>
<p>&#8220;There&#8217;s nothing worse than getting home in the evening and not having your  garage door open. It&#8217;s dark outside and after tripping on the porch step you  search for your front door key.</p>
<p>Finally, you find it only to scratch your new front door up trying to find the  keyhole. Exhausted, you get inside and plop down on the couch just when you  remember your car is still running in your drivewayâ€¦.&#8221;</p>
<p>In this scenario the problem was a faulty garage door opener and the agitation  is all the terrible things that happen because of the faulty garage door opener.</p>
<p><strong>3. Provide the Solution</strong></p>
<p>Now that you&#8217;ve built your readers interest by making them feel the pain it&#8217;s  time to provide the solution. This is the part of the sales letter where you  boldly stake your claim that you can solve the reader&#8217;s problem.</p>
<p>In this section you will introduce yourself, your product and/or your service.  Relieve the reader&#8217;s mind by telling them that they there&#8217;s no need to struggle  through all their problems because your product or service will solve it for  them.</p>
<p><strong>4. Present your Credentials</strong></p>
<p>In most cases, after you have introduced yourself and your product or service  your reader is thinking, &#8220;Yeah, sure he fix my problem. That&#8217;s what they all  say.&#8221; So now it&#8217;s important to hit them right away with the reason why you can  be trusted.</p>
<p>List your credentials including any one of the following:</p>
<p>Successful case studies.<br />
Prestigious companies (or people) you have done business with.<br />
The length of time you&#8217;ve been in your field of expertise<br />
Conferences where you have spoken<br />
Important awards or recognitions</p>
<p>Your reader should get the impression after reading this section that &#8220;you&#8217;ve  been there and done that&#8221; with great success and that the reader can expect the  same results.</p>
<p><strong>5. Show the Benefits</strong></p>
<p>Now it&#8217;s time to tell the reader how they will personally benefit from your  product or service. Don&#8217;t make the common mistake of telling all about the  features of your product without talking about the benefits. As I already  stated, people are interested, not so much in you, or even your product or  service, but what it will do for them.</p>
<p>Get a piece of paper and draw a line down the center of the paper. Now write all  the features of your product or service on the left. Think about the obvious  benefits and the not-so-obvious benefits of the each feature and write them down  on the right side of the paper. Most of the time your product will have hidden  benefits that people won&#8217;t naturally think of.</p>
<p>For example, a hot tub not only soothes and relaxes your muscles but it also  gives you an opportunity to talk to your spouse without interruptions. The  hidden benefit is greater communication with your spouse and ultimately a better  marriage!</p>
<p>Bullet point each benefit to make it easier to read. Think about every possible  benefit your reader may derive from your product or service. In many cases,  people will buy a product or service based on only one of the benefits you list.</p>
<p><strong>6. Give Social Proof</strong></p>
<p>After you&#8217;ve presented all your benefits the reader will again begin to doubt  you, even though they secretly want all your claimed benefits to be true. To  build your credibility and believability present your reader with testimonials  from satisfied customers.</p>
<p>Testimonials are powerful selling tools that prove your claims to be true. To  make your testimonial even more powerful include pictures of your customers with  their names and addresses (at least the city and state).</p>
<p>You might even ask if you can use their phone number. Most readers won&#8217;t call  but it is a powerful statement to include their complete contact information. It  demonstrates that you are real and so are the testimonials.</p>
<p><strong>7. Make Your Offer</strong></p>
<p>Your offer is the most important part of your sales letter. A great offer can  overcome mediocre copy but great copy cannot overcome a mediocre offer. Your  offer should be irresistible. You want your reader to say to themselves, &#8220;I&#8217;d be  stupid not to take advantage of this deal.&#8221;</p>
<p>Your offer can come in many different formats. The best offers are usually an  attractive combination of price, terms, and free gifts. For example, if you were  selling a car your offer might be a discounted retail price, low interest rate,  and a free year of gas.</p>
<p>Hint: When developing your offer you should always try to raise the value of  your offer by adding on products or services rather than lowering your price.  Include vivid explanations of the benefits of the additional products or  services you are offering in order to raise the perceived value of your offer.</p>
<p><strong>8. Give a Guarantee</strong></p>
<p>To make your offer even more irresistible you need to take all the risk out of  the purchase. Remember, that people have a built-in fear that they are going to  get ripped off. How many times have you purchased a product and got stuck with  it because the merchant wouldn&#8217;t give your money back?</p>
<p>Give the absolute strongest guarantee you are able to give. If you aren&#8217;t  confident enough in your product or service to give a strong guarantee you  should think twice about offering it to he public.</p>
<p>In reality, almost all small businesses already have a very strong guarantee,  but don&#8217;t realize it! If you had an irate customer that wanted their money back  would you just say, &#8220;No, I&#8217;m sorry. I will not give your money back.&#8221;? Probably  not. If they insist on getting their money back, in most cases you&#8217;ll give it  back to them.</p>
<p>You see, most businesses already have a strong guarantee and don&#8217;t hold it up  and trumpet it for fear that a lot of people would take them up on it. That&#8217;s  simply doesn&#8217;t happen. When was the last time you asked for a full refund on  something? If you&#8217;re like me, it&#8217;s been a while.</p>
<p>Here is an example of a guarantee that I give for one of my products:</p>
<p>* * &#8220;100%, No Questions Asked, Take-It-To-The-Bank Guarantee&#8221; * *</p>
<p>I personally guarantee if you make a diligent effort to use just a few of the  techniques in this course, you&#8217;ll produce at least $4,490 profit in the next 12  months. That&#8217;s right, $4,490 extra profit you never would have seen without this  course. If you don&#8217;t, I&#8217;ll refund the entire cost of the course to you.</p>
<p>Actually, you get double protection. Here&#8217;s how. At any time during the 12  months, if you sincerely feel I fell short in any way on delivering everything I  promised, I&#8217;ll be happy to give you a complete refund. Even if it&#8217;s on the last  day of the twelfth month!</p>
<p>This guarantee extends for an entire year and that they will receive specific  benefits (in this case it&#8217;s money). It they don&#8217;t get what they expect, they get  their money back with no questions asked. This virtually eliminates all the risk  for the buyer.</p>
<p>Hint: Your offer may be so good that people won&#8217;t believe it. You&#8217;ve heard the  old axiom, &#8220;If it&#8217;s too good to be true, it probably is.&#8221; To avoid this  thinking, give the reason why you can give such as great offer. For example, you  might have goofed when ordering inventory and now you&#8217;re overstocked and that&#8217;s  why you can offer such a great price. When people read the reason why, it will  help them reconcile your irresistible offer in their mind and make it more  believable.</p>
<p><strong>9. Inject Scarcity</strong></p>
<p>Most people take their time responding to offers, even when they are  irresistible. There are many reasons why people procrastinate investing in a  solution. The following are just a few:</p>
<p>They don&#8217;t feel enough pain to make a change<br />
They are too busy and just forget<br />
They don&#8217;t feel that the perceived value outweighs your asking price<br />
They are just plain lazy</p>
<p>To motivate people to take action they usually need an extra incentive. Remember  when I said that people are more motivated to act by the fear of loss rather  than gain, that&#8217;s exactly what you are doing with you inject scarcity into your  letter.</p>
<p>When people think there is a scarce supply of something they need they usually  rush to get some of it. You can create a feeling of scarcity by telling your  reader that either the quantity is in limited supply or that your offer is valid  for only a limited time period.</p>
<p>Your offer could sound something like this:</p>
<p>&#8220;If you purchase by (future date) you will get the entire set of free bonuses&#8221;</p>
<p>or</p>
<p>&#8220;Our supply is limited to only 50 (product or service) and will be sent to you  on a &#8216;first come, first served&#8217; basis. After they are gone there won&#8217;t be any  more available.&#8221;</p>
<p>or</p>
<p>&#8220;This offer is only good until (future date) after which the (product or  service) will return to its original price.&#8221;</p>
<p>One word of caution: If you make an offer you need to live up to it. If you go  back on your word after the deadline date you will begin to erode the trust and  confidence your customers have come to expect from you.</p>
<p><strong>10. Call to Action</strong></p>
<p>Do not assume that your reader knows what to do to receive the benefits from  your offer. You must spell out how to make the order in a very clear and concise  language. Whether its picking up the phone and making the call, filling out an  order form, faxing the order form to your office etcâ€¦. you must tell them  exactly how to order from you.</p>
<p>Your call to action must be &#8220;action-oriented.&#8221; You can do this using words like  &#8216;Pick Up the Phone and Call Now!&#8221; or &#8220;Tear Off the Order Form and Send It In  Today!&#8221; or &#8220;Come to Our Store by Friday and â€¦&#8221; Be explicit and succinct in your  instructions.</p>
<p>Plant your call to action throughout your letter. If you are asking the reader  to call your free information line then perhaps some of the testimonials might  say, &#8220;When I called their free information line&#8221; or in your offer you might say,  &#8220;When you call our free information lineâ€¦&#8221; Then when you give the call to action  at the end of the letter, people won&#8217;t be surprised or confused. It will be  consistent with what you said all throughout your letter.</p>
<p><strong>11. Give a Warning</strong></p>
<p>A good sales letter will continue to build emotion, right up to the very end. In  fact, your letter should continue to build emotion even after your call to  action. Using the &#8220;risk of loss&#8221; strategy, tell the reader what would happen if  they didn&#8217;t take advantage of your offer.</p>
<p>Perhaps they would continue to:</p>
<p>Struggle day to day to make ends meat<br />
Work too hard just to get a few customers<br />
Lose the opportunity to receive all your valuable bonuses<br />
Keep getting what they&#8217;ve always got<br />
Watch other companies get all the business<br />
Etc.</p>
<p>Try to paint a graphic picture in the mind of the reader about the consequences  of not taking action now. Remind them just how terrible their current state is  and that it just doesn&#8217;t have to be that way.</p>
<p><strong>12. Close with a Reminder</strong></p>
<p>Always include a postscript (P.S.). Believe it or not, your P.S. is the third  most read element of your sales letter. I&#8217;ve seen good copywriters use not just  one postscript, but many (P.P.S). In your postscript you want to remind them of  your irresistible offer. If you&#8217;ve used scarcity in your sales letter, include  your call to action then remind them of the limited time (or quantity) offer. It  sounds like a simple step but postscripts get noticed.</p>
<p>Viola! You now have a powerful sales letter. Using this 12-step formula anyone  can write an effective sales letter that sells. The following are a few extra  tips to help you write an even better sales letter:</p>
<p><strong>Tip #1:</strong> Write the Features/Benefits &#8211; The biggest hurdle to writing a great  sales letter is just getting started. Many people have a fear of writing. One  way to get your letter started and develop a helpful guide for your letter is to  write a feature/benefit list.</p>
<p>Take a set of 3 x 5 cards and write all the features you know about on one side  of the cards. Then turn the cards over and write a benefit for each feature.  You&#8217;ll have started your letter and produced a list of benefits you can use to  write your letter.</p>
<p><strong>Tip #2: </strong>Let Your Letter Cool Off &#8211; Once you have completed the letter, let it  sit for a day or so. This will allow you to be more objective you when you edit  your letter. If you&#8217;ve just spend the last few hours working on your letter you  will find it hard to catch the mistakes or edits in the letter because you&#8217;re  just too close to it.</p>
<p><strong>Tip #3: </strong>Develop a &#8220;Swipe File&#8221; &#8211; Your swipe file will be a source of great ideas  and help get your creative juices flowing. When you see a great ad or receive a  particularly effective letter in the mail, keep it in a file that you can refer  back to again and again. Companies pay thousands of dollars to develop their  marketing materials; you might as well take advantage of that by using it as a  model for your own work.</p>
<p><strong>Tip #4:</strong> Develop a Customer Profile Sheet &#8211; Before you start writing your sales  letter, develop a customer profile sheet by documenting every thing you know  about your target customer. Some great copywriters put a picture of a typical  customer in front of them as write their letter to help them remember to whom  they are writing the letter.</p>
<p><strong>Tip #5: </strong>Don&#8217;t Worry About the Length &#8211; I often get the question, &#8220;How long  should my sales letter be?&#8221; and my answer is, &#8220;As long as it needs to be.&#8221; Each  part of your sales letter should be building your case. If it takes Â½ page to  build your case then that&#8217;s how long your letter should be; however, I use a  24-page sales letter to successfully sell one of my products.</p>
<p>Most anyone can write a powerful sales letter by just following this simple  12-step process. Make sure that you include each of the steps because each step  builds your case in a unique way and adds to the reader&#8217;s emotions.</p>
<p>David Frey, President of Marketing Best Practices Inc., a Houston-based small  business marketing consulting firm and is the senior editor of the Marketing  Best Practices Newsletter featuring small business marketing best practices. <a target="_new" onmouseout="window.status=''" onmouseover="window.status='Click here'; return true" href="http://www.mcssl.com/app/aftrack.asp?afid=534195&#038;u=www.TheMarketingBible.com">www.MarketingBestPractices.com</a></p>
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